Stanley Manufacturing is going to open a large factory in Action. Some people are in favor of this decision. While others oppose changing the circumstances. There are several negative effects about opening a large factory in a small town. For one thing, the release of gas brings about some pollution, such as air and noise pollution. Moreover, if the factory releases the waste water in the ocean, it will harm the fish and aquatic plants, even humanity. Worst of all, the carbon dioxide released from the factory may lead to global warming. For another thing, the popularity will have a dramatic increase and the problems of overpopulation because of the construct of the factory. Furthermore, jobs will be fewer and fewer to chose for employees so that the unemployment will be increasing. In order to protect the quiet and peace environment, the residents should not built a large factory in their hometown.
Stanley Manufacturing is going to open a large factory in Action.
回覆刪除是Acton
jobs will be fewer and fewer to chose for employees
是choose還有蓋工廠工作不是會變比較多嗎?
jobs will be fewer and fewer to "be chosen" for employees
回覆刪除humanity是人性的意思,
回覆刪除可以改成Human
以上。
Furthermore, jobs will be fewer and fewer to chose for employees so that the unemployment will be increasing.
回覆刪除改成to be chosen會不會比較好
1.Some people are in favor of this decision. While others oppose changing the circumstances.
回覆刪除﹡兩句合併。
2....because of the construct of the factory.
﹡construct→construction
3.Furthermore, jobs will be fewer and fewer to chose for employees...
﹡chose→be chosen
4....the residents should not built a large factory in their hometown.
﹡built→build
﹡以上,淺見…
Furthermore, jobs will be fewer and fewer to "chose" for employees so that the unemployment will be increasing.
回覆刪除是be chosen
還有...
蓋工廠為什麼失業率會提升??
Stanley Manufacturing is going to open a large factory in Action.
回覆刪除裡的Action 是Acton喔!
jobs will be fewer and fewer to chose for employees so that the unemployment will be increasing.
裡的 chose 我會寫被動 be chosen
以上~
Moreover, if the factory releases the waste water in the ocean...
回覆刪除"in"→"into"。
其餘同上述意見。
because of the construct of the factory是construction哦
回覆刪除Furthermore, jobs will be fewer and fewer to chose for employees so that the unemployment will be increasing為什麼工作會減少?