contrasting 2 - revised

There are resumes from two persons applying for a job as a new English instructor. After glancing over the resumes, I will hire Debra Fines.  There are several reasons why I decided to choose her. First, Debra has more education than Lynn. She can teach students correct concepts.  Furthermore, she has more employment experience than Lynn.  For instance, she had been a consultant, author, teaching assistant, swimming teacher, and server before.  I think she learn intensive knowledge and can deal with a variety of difficulties from her experience.  Moreover, she had even published books about English.  It is certain that she has specialized in English for several years.  In addition to English, she can speak other foreign languages fluently as well, such as French.  From these advantages above, I choose Debra to be the best decision.