2011年6月9日 星期四

Discussing Effects 1

After getting out of bed, some people drink a cup of coffee before having breakfast.  However, drinking too much caffeine may cause several problems.  For one thing, people may have a headache, and feel nervous and anxious, which lead to suffer from insomnia which makes them sleep uncomfortably.  Moreover, a wave of nausea sweeps over people and caffeine brings about some gastrointestinal problems. Therefore, people having a poor digestion can’t drink too much coffee, or they will feel painful.  Last but not the least, caffeine causes even fast or irregular heartbeat and muscle tremors.  To keep a healthy body, not to absorb too much caffeine is the best way.

9 則留言:

  1. drinking too much caffeine這樣講有點怪怪的耶
    其他應該沒問題

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  2. 喝咖啡因?
    怪怪的
    其他沒什麼問題

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  3. For one thing, … which lead to suffer from insomnia which makes them sleep uncomfortably. 在下想這樣改:
    "…which lead to suffering of insomnia that makes…"

    Therefore, people having a poor digestion…
    "a"應該要刪去。

    如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。

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  4. 應該把drinking too much caffeine改成coffee比較好(笑

    然後就應該沒了

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  5. ㄇㄒ好棒^_^
    好多字都好棒^_^
    BTW, "Insomnia" 是首歌阿
    麗旭有唱快去聽唷!!!

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  6. which lead to suffer from insomnia which makes them sleep uncomfortably.
    這裡有兩個which耶~~ 我會把第二個改成that

    以上~

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  7. 1.However, drinking too much caffeine may cause several problems.
    ﹡...drinking too much coffee containing much caffeine may...
    2....which lead to suffer from insomnia which makes them sleep uncomfortably.
    ﹡suffer→their suffering ﹡前面有which,所以後面的which換成that比較好。

    ﹡以上,淺見…

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  8. drinking too much caffeine
    咖啡因沒有直接喝的喔!
    改成drinking too much caffeinated beverage

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