While talking about an important decision, I think that getting married is one of the pleasure span of life. One reason is that I desire to dress a elegant wedding dress and be blessed by everyone in a church for my wedding ceremony. Another reason I can be with my lovely husband for good and support a wonderful family. Moreover, we can even raise some adorable children, which can be filled with happiness in my life. Finally, I believe that a stable marriage can be a motivation for me to live my life. For instance, when I feel tired and want to give up at work, I will be reminiscent of my husband and children. Therefore, I can throw away the pain and go on working. In sum, getting married is one of the most important and ideal parts in my life.
Another reason "is that" I can be with my lovely husband for good and support a wonderful family
回覆刪除I feel tired and want to give up at work
回覆刪除give up at work用at work是不是不對阿?
"a" elegant wedding dress
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Another reason "" I can be with my lovely husband for good and support a wonderful family.
加上is that
Another reason I can be with my lovely husband for good and support a wonderful family.
回覆刪除裡的 reason 後面要加 is that
以上~
1.One reason is that I desire to dress a elegant wedding dress and...
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2.Moreover, we can even raise some adorable children, which can be filled with happiness in my life.
﹡有點不懂妳的意思…總覺得怪怪的。
﹡整體來說寫得不錯哦。
Moreover, we can even raise some adorable children, which can be filled with happiness in my life.
回覆刪除不懂。閣下之意乃＂養育子女使我的生活充滿幸福＂嗎？
如果是，在下提供一句，參考如下：
＂..., which can bring happiness in my life.＂
For instance, ...give up at work, I will be reminiscent of my husband and children.
＂give up working＂參考用。
＂be reminiscent of＂不確定主詞可否為人；
＂I will think of＂己見還請閣下斟酌。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
give up at work
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give up my work會不會好一點
應該就沒了:)
Another reason I can be with my lovely husband是another reason is that~
回覆刪除which can be filled with happiness in my life是fil my life with happiness的意思嗎?
want to give up at work是什麼意思?