Chinese New Year is my favorite holiday for several reasons. First of all, I can have a wonderful family reunion dinner with my family and neighbors on New Year's Eve. In addition, I can eat plenty of coolies and candy at home because my family always prepare them for celebrating the significant holiday. Furthermore, by visiting and saying "Happy new year" to my relatives, I can recieve a number of red envelopes with delight. Last, instead of going to school to take exams and do assignments, I can stay at home and relax myself during the holiday. Chinese New Year is my favorite holiday because it always brings me warmth.
In addition, I can eat plenty of coolies...
回覆刪除妳是要寫＂cookies＂吧？
Furthermore,..., I can recieve a number of...
應該是＂receive＂才對。
我也喜歡新年、更喜歡寒假。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
I can eat plenty of coolies
回覆刪除coolies 應該是打錯了!!
receive 打錯了 :)
過年是變胖的節日 ><"
I can eat plenty of coolies
回覆刪除裡的coolies 是cookies.
I can recieve a number of red envelopes
裡的recieve 是receive.
以上~
辛苦了!
每到新年我家總會多出很多的巧克力..
想克只也克制不了
="=
沒什麼錯誤 大家上面也都有提了~
回覆刪除除了拼字都沒有什麼錯誤了^_^
回覆刪除過年最開心了，可以領很多紅包xd
recieve拼錯了
回覆刪除然後其他沒有(笑
1.In addition, I can eat plenty of coolies and candy at home because...
回覆刪除→In addition, I can eat plenty of cookies and candies at home because...
2.I can recieve a number of red envelopes with delight.
→I can receive a number of red envelopes with delight.
(以上，淺見…)
coolies 這個是????
回覆刪除其實沒啥錯誤耶!!!
I can eat plenty of "coolies" and candy
回覆刪除是cookies吧!