To plan a party, I would follow these steps below. First of all, I would choose when and where to hold the party. Before making the decision I should think twice about the time that my guests could participate in and the place that every one could come conveniently. Next, I should go shopping for food and beverages that could provide for my guests for preparation. After that, I should write some letters full of my sincerity, and then send invitations to my friends. After doing these steps, I would have fun celebrating with my friends in the party.
Next, I should go shopping for food and beverages that could provide for ...我也許會寫：
回覆刪除Next, I should...beverages (that are)provided for
……通常不是應該先寫完邀請函
、確定人數後，才去採購？
（純屬個人疑問）
the place "that" every one could come conveniently
回覆刪除這邊應該是用"where"
I should write some letters "full of" my sincerity
這邊看起來怪怪的
應該寫成"being full of"或"filled with"
provide的用法好像錯囉!!
回覆刪除結尾好像怪怪滴
不是how to plan a party嗎
怎麼感覺你在寫....以前的經歷之類的東東
說不定是我邏輯怪怪滴
呃.....不要見怪~~~
是provide for嗎
回覆刪除好像怪怪的(思
我有個疑問，would 跟will的差別?
回覆刪除通篇文章都用would可是計畫不是未來式嗎?
還是我的想法有問題阿? Q口Q
感覺辦party的順序好像有點顛倒了
回覆刪除provide for my guests for preparation
這句感覺怪怪的
the place that every one could come conveniently
回覆刪除裡的that我會寫where
for food and beverages that could provide for my guests for preparation
裡的provide for 我會寫 provide to
I should write some letters full of my sincerity
裡的full of 我會寫filled with
以上!
大發啦!
Next, I should go shopping for food and beverages that could provide for my guests for preparation.
回覆刪除→Next, I should go shopping for food and beverages that could provide my guests with preparation.
(以上，淺見…)