2011年4月13日 星期三

Describing a Person

I am looking for a women which is my friend. She got lost in Tainan City. Her name is Linda. She is shortish and petite. And she has long dark hair. It looks very shining and beautiful. Her skin is very white and good. She even doesn't have any pimple on her face. Furthermore, she also has big watery eyes and small mouth. Then, she is wearing a black dress and a brown hat. She also in long black boots. Moreover, she has a white purse with her. She looks like a noble lady. Then, she is taking a dog for a walk as well.
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  1. 妤如2011年4月17日 凌晨12:28

    I am looking for a women which is my friend.
    ＂women＂→＂woman＂；
    ＂which＂→＂who＂。

    She is shortish...
    寫＂She is short...＂應該比較好。

    She even doesn't have...
    應該是＂She doesn't even have...＂。

    Furthermore, she also has big watery eyes...
    ＂watery eyes＂替換成＂dewy eyes＂，
    比較適當。
    因為，前者我查到的意思都比較負面。

    She also in long black boots.
    ＂She＂之後要加個＂is＂吧。


    如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。

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  2. 芳珠2011年4月20日 晚上11:06

    I am looking for a women which is my friend. women 應該是woman吧 而且是人應該要用who
    And she has long dark hair. It looks very shining and beautiful.
    如果是我我會把他連成一句,And she has long dark hair which looks very shining and beautiful.
    she is wearing a black dress and a brown hat.
    應該是wears就好了吧!
    She also in long black boots. also前面應該要加is

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  3. 品婷2011年4月20日 晚上11:33

    I am looking for a women which is my friend
    women要改成womanb然後which改成who
    其他的大家差不多都講了

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  4. 姚薇...愛慘珉玗了!!!2011年4月20日 晚上11:52

    I am looking for a women which is my friend.
    裡的women 是woman,且which是who 喔!
    She also in long black boots.
    裡沒有動詞,+個is吧!

    以上~
    這個女生根本是從漫畫書上跑出來的人吧!
    及所有adj於一身
    啊啦拉拉~

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  5. 篔簹2011年4月20日 晚上11:52

    a women
    應該是
    a woman

    which is my friend
    改成
    who比較好吧

    her skin用good
    好像不太對欸
    其他沒有(笑

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  6. 亭安2011年4月23日 清晨5:02

    I am looking for a "women" "which" is my friend.
    是woman和who

    She also in long black boots.
    要加is喔!

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  7. 姜姜(21)2011年4月24日 上午8:13

    我覺得第一句的which改成who比較適當...
    然後皮膚好的用法好像怪怪的?!
    最後，找位失蹤的朋友...
    路人應該不會看他有沒有青春痘xd
    啦啦啦^_^

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  8. 冠伶2011年5月4日 晚上11:46

    1.I am looking for a women which is my friend.
    →I am looking for a woman who is my friend.
    2.She is shortish and petite.
    →She is short and petite.
    3....she also has big watery eyes and small mouth.
    →3...she also has big watery eyes and a small mouth.
    4.Then, she is wearing a black dress and a brown hat.
    →Then, she was wearing a black dress and a brown hat.
    5.She also in long black boots.
    →She was also in long black boots.
    6.Moreover, she has a white purse with her. She looks like a noble lady. Then, she is taking a dog for a walk as well.
    →這邊要改過去式嘛?
    (以上，淺見…)

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  9. 宜珍2011年5月6日 清晨7:04

    I am looking for a women which is my friend
    應該是用who吧!!!
    women應該要改成woman

    She also in long black boots
    這句沒有動詞耶.....

    大概醬....

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