2011年4月27日 星期三
Comparing 2
In history, John Aams and Thomas Jefferson were two important Americans. The information about them are common in many parts. First, the death of John is like the death of Thomas. They all died on July4, 1826. Furthermore, John is the same important person in the American Revolution as Thomas. Likewise, John and Thomas delegate to the Continential Congress. In addition, John studied and practiced the same as Thomas. They all studied and practiced law. Finally, the two men were the president of the US. The two significant men have a number of the same information. What a surprising thing!
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First, the death of John is like the death of Thomas.這邊用like感覺很奇怪
回覆刪除They all died on July4, 1826.
all是用於三人
Likewise, John and Thomas delegate to the Continential Congress. 我記得delegate是名詞
以上......
They all died on July4, 1826.
回覆刪除應該是both
Finally, the two men were the president of the US.
這邊president要加s嗎? 然後是U.S.
They all died on July4
回覆刪除裡的all 是both喔!
以上~
1.First, the death of John is like the death of Thomas.
回覆刪除→First, the death of John is like that of Thomas.
2.John is the same important person in the American Revolution as Thomas.
→John was the same important person in the American Revolution as Thomas.
3.They all studied and practiced law.
→They both studied and practiced law.
4.The two significant men have a number of the same information.
→The two significant men have a number of similarities.
(以上，淺見…)
Aams?
回覆刪除是Adams吧(思
First, the death of John is like the death of Thomas.
是用like嗎...
怪詭異的(汗
They all died on July4, 1826.
all改成both會不會比較好
the death of John is like the death of Thomas這樣寫好像有點奇怪
回覆刪除They all died on July4應該用both哦
Furthermore, John is the same important person 這裡時態突然變成現在式的is了
John "Aams" and Thomas Jefferson were two important Americans.
回覆刪除是Adams
The information about them "are" common in many parts.
是is
John and Thomas "delegate" to the "Continential" Congress.
應該用過去式delegated
後面是Continental
The two significant men have "a number of" the same information.
a number of 後面是加複數名詞喔!
所以這裡應該用a great deal of
＂Aams＂錯字。
回覆刪除Likewise, John and Thomas delegate to the Continential Congress.
在下覺得是＂John and Thomas were delegates to...＂
好像和上位大人衝突呢（煩惱）……
請作者自行斟酌吧。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
我覺得第一句用現在式比較適當，然後
回覆刪除Likewise, John and Thomas delegate to the Continential Congress.
這邊應該要用過去式，還有Continental拼錯了A_A