Should we use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment? People in the world have different opinions about it. It is often argued that the death penalty should be abolished because it loses their Survival Right. However, in my opinion, I think we should use the death penalty. To the criminals, they don’t deserve to own the selection because they had hurt others’ spirit and lost their rights. Some people think that we can give them an opportunity of turning a new leaf and making up for the mistakes they had been made. Nonetheless, I consider that using the death penalty can control the behavior of the public, reduce the crime rate, and identify with the victims. Although many people insist that we often abuse the death penalty and don’t know the standard, which may bring about a lot of broken family. Nevertheless, I think that if the convicts can respect life and learn the importance of life, they won’t hurt innocent people. It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I believe go on using the death penalty is the best punishment for criminals.
making up for the mistakes they had been made.
回覆刪除應該they had made就好了吧?
Some people think that we can give them an opportunity of turning a new "leaf"
回覆刪除是life嗎??
恩恩
1.To the criminals, they don’t deserve to own the selection because they had hurt others’ spirit and lost their rights.
回覆刪除→To the criminals, they don’t deserve the selection because they hurt others’ spirit and lost their rights.(如果後面要過去完成式，前面用過去式會比較好；如果前面用現在式，後面用過去式應該就可以了。)
2.Some people think that we can give them an opportunity of turning a new leaf and making up for the mistakes they had been made.
→Some people think that we can give them an opportunity of turning over a new leaf and making up for the mistakes they made.(同上)
寫得不錯哦。
以上，淺見。
they don’t deserve to own the selection
回覆刪除應該不用to own吧
其他沒了=ˇ=
the mistakes they had been made用they have made比較對哦
回覆刪除turning a new "leaf"
回覆刪除是要寫life嗎?
the mistakes they had been made
回覆刪除裡的had been made我會把been刪掉
turning a new leaf
是什麼意思呀?
轉換成新的一頁?
以上~
It is often argued that ...because it loses their Survival Right.
回覆刪除我想把＂it＂改成＂criminals＂。
To the criminals, they don’t deserve to own the selection because they had hurt others’ spirit and lost their rights.
＂selection＂比較偏向選舉方面；
在下覺得可寫＂choice＂。
Some people think that we can give them an opportunity of turning a new leaf and making up for the mistakes they had been made.
→＂turning over a new leaf＂。
→＂had made＂。
Nevertheless, I think that ...and learn the importance of life,
第二個＂life＂可以替換成代名詞＂it＂。
感覺孟萱進步很多吶。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。