There are a number of foreign culture restaurants around the world. And I have been to two restaurants which are alike in many ways. One of them is McDonalds, and the other is Kentucky Fried Chicken(KFC). First, both of them serve fast food, such as fried chicken, hamburgers, French fries, and so on. Likewise, they also have similar restaurant styles which come from America Taiwan
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1.Moreover, the price on the menu of them is similar and usually more expensive than other local restaurants.
回覆刪除→Moreover, the prices on the menu of them are similar and usually more expensive than other local restaurants.
2.Similarly, they both provide services of ordering meals on the phone.
→這句，service不可數，關於後面能否用of，我不甚確定。
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Likewise, they also have similar restaurant styles which come from America.
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Similarly, they both...ordering meals on the phone.
回覆刪除在下偏好＂by the phone＂或是＂over the phone＂。
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service是不可數的哦
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