Self-Evaluation - revised

In my opinion, I’m an inverted and shy girl.  I always talks to someone with a blush.  But if you know me better, you will find that I have a good sense of humor. Pleasing people can bring me much joy.  Moreover, I always treat others with trust because I don’t like the feeling of lying to others.  And I don’t want to be cheated, too.  Furthermore, I am devoted to my work and have self-control. For instance, I always study actively without my parents’ urge.  I always try my best to do anything because I don’t want to be a burden to others.  As far as I am concerned, being responsible is the basis of my life.

I’m interested in listening to music, which can not only console me while I am in a bad mood but also make me feel relaxed under pressure.  In addition to Chinese music, I like English, Japanese, and Korean music as well.  Furthermore, I can learn more about the native languages and cultures by listening to music from different countries.  With my interest and hobbies, I can sharpen my English ability as well.