Expressing an Opinion 1

Should we use the death penalty as a form of criminal punishment? People in the world have different opinions about it.  It is often argued that the death penalty should be abolished because it loses their Survival Right.  However, in my opinion, I think we should use the death penalty. To the criminals, they don’t deserve to own the selection because they had hurt others’ spirit and lost their rights.  Some people think that we can give them an opportunity of turning a new leaf and making up for the mistakes they had been made.  Nonetheless, I consider that using the death penalty can control the behavior of the public, reduce the crime rate, and identify with the victims. Although many people insist that we often abuse the death penalty and don’t know the standard, which may bring about a lot of broken family. Nevertheless, I think that if the convicts can respect life and learn the importance of life, they won’t hurt innocent people.  It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I believe go on using the death penalty is the best punishment for criminals.

contrasting 2

There are resumes from two persons applying for a job about a new English instructor. After glancing over the resumes, I would hire Debra Fines.  There are several reasons why I decide to choose her. First, Debra has more education than Lynn. She can teach students correct concepts.  Furthermore, she has more employment experience than Lynn.  For instance, she had been a consultant, author, teaching assistant, swimming teacher, and server before.  I think she had learned intensive knowledge and can deal with a variety of difficulties from her experience.  Moreover, she even had published books about English.  It is certain that she has specialized in English for several years.  In addition to English, she can speak other foreign languages fluently as well, such as French.  From these advantages above, I choose Debra to be the best decision.

contrasting 1

My friend and I are looking for an apartment to share near campus. After flipping through descriptions of two apartments which named Fairfax Apartments and CAMPUS APTS, we would like to Fairfax Apartments. There are several reasons why we would choose this one. In the first place, Fairfax Apartments have 2 bedrooms, and the extensive space can contain us. Furthermore, Owing to both of us cannot endure the burning sun in summer, we choose Fairfax Apartments which is air conditioned. Moreover, Fairfax Apartments is furnished that is a great for us. We don’t have to think twice about and buy new furniture. The only flaw of Fairfax Apartments is that the rent is more expensive than that of CAMPUS APTS. Nonetheless, we don’t care about it because we have a comfortable circumstance to live in.

comparing 3

There are a number of foreign culture restaurants around the world. And I have been to two restaurants which are alike in many ways. One of them is McDonalds, and the other is Kentucky Fried Chicken(KFC). First, both of them serve fast food, such as fried chicken, hamburgers, French fries, and so on. Likewise, they also have similar restaurant styles which come from America. Moreover, the price on the menu of them is similar and usually more expensive than other local restaurants. Similarly, they both provide services of ordering meals on the phone. The two similar restaurants are very common and lure plenty of people in Taiwan.

comparing 2 - revised

In history, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were two important Americans. The information about them are common in many parts. First, the death of John was like that of Thomas. They both died on July 4, 1826. Furthermore, John was the same important person in the American Revolution as Thomas. Likewise, John and Thomas was delegated to the Continential Congress. In addition, John studied and practiced the same as Thomas. They both studied and practiced law. Finally, the two men were the presidentd of the U.S. The two significant men have a great deal of the same information. What a surprising thing!

comparing 1 - revised

There are two driver license. One of the owners is a woman named Stephanie  Brooks. And the other owner is Ann Friedman, who is a woman. By chance, they have some common information. In the first place, Stephanie's black hair is the same color as Ann's. In addition, Stephanies's eye color is similar to Ann's. They both have brown eyes. Moreover, Stephanie's and Ann's height are alike. Finally, the date of birth of Stephanie is like the date of birth of Ann. To my surprise, they have so much same information. I think that it is miraculous.

Giving reasons - My Favorite Hoiliday - revised

Chinese New Year is my favorite holiday for several reasons. First of all, I can have a wonderful family reunion dinner with my family and neighbors on New Year's Eve. In addition, I can eat plenty of cookies and candy at home because my family always prepare them for celebrating the significant holiday. Furthermore, by visiting and saying "Happy new year" to my relatives, I can receive a number of red envelopes with delight. Last, instead of going to school to take exams and do assignments, I can stay at home and relax myself during the holiday. Chinese New Year is my favorite holiday because it always brings me warmth.